Looking at Craft: CCSS in Action
I want to share with you my
experience teaching a CCSS inspired lesson to my graduate students at Queens College .
Fortunately for me, I get to teach a class called “History through Children’s
Literature,” and each week we discus books through two lenses—history and
literature—and how to share these books with children.
Our recent
focus was on Night Flight, a picture
book written by Robert Burleigh and illustrated by Wendell Minor. This book
describes Amelia Earhart’s 1932 solo flight across the Atlantic ,
a trip she took exactly five years after Charles Lindberg’s famous flight. To
begin our discussion, I asked the students what they thought about the book, a
poetic text accompanied by emotionally charged, vibrant paintings.
Here’s what
happened. Every single student talked about the paintings—how intriguing they
are because they provide so many different perspectives on Amelia, how
well-researched they are, and how “you don’t even have to read the book because
the pictures tell it all. You know the story without reading the words.” And
while all the students were shaking their heads in agreement and I was weighing
how to proceed, one person—and it only takes one—remarked that the language was
very rich.
I took that
comment as an invitation to discuss the language—the craft of language as
suggested by CCSS. The standards remind us to distinguish between information
provided by the illustrations and information provided by the text.They also remind us to examine meaning of domain-specific words and phrases. Night Flight contains a great deal of
figurative language—alliteration, similie, metaphor, personification, and
repetition. This language is used for a purpose. It helps the reader experience
the emotion of the flight—the ups and downs Earhart experienced.
I shared
with my students how the language of the book began by conveying a feeling of
calm, then changed to a feeling of tension, and ended with a feeling of calm
restored. In effect, readers experienced calm→tension→calm. To demonstrate
this, we divided a large sheet of paper into three columns and reread the book,
writing down the words and phrases that conveyed these feelings. Here are a few
examples (all quotes) of what we found:
Calm
(pp. 1-7) Tense (pp. 8-20)
Calm (pp. 21-27)
The plane swoops like a swallow…
The waves are curls of cream-colored froth.
…wisps of shimmering clouds
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The blackness erupts.
Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield.
Lightening scribbles its zigzag warning…
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The countryside spreads out like a green fan beneath her.
…unbelievable stillness inside her
A great peace wells up.
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Amelia, we
see, begins the flight confidently and even has time to enjoy the scene from
her window. Yet, it turned into a tough flight. The weather was bad. Her
altimeter broke. The wings of the plane iced up. The plane was leaking gas. Yet
she successfully landed in Ireland
and emerged with a smile. The language of the text, combined with the
illustrations helps us experience this.
I am
telling you all of this for a reason. The CCSS, in calling for a rigorous
approach to literacy, reminds us to take an in-depth look at nonfiction books.
In calling for us to pay attention to the craft of nonfiction, we are reminded
by CCSS to think about the language choices authors make. At first my students
paid no attention the words as a source of meaning, opting instead to focus
entirely on the very appealing and meaningful illustrations. Yet after our
discussion and analysis of the words, one student remarked that she had never
really thought about looking at the language and another said she would like to
try this with her students. In my opinion, that’s the value of CCSS. It opens
up avenues of investigation that we might not think about.