Recently,
an elementary school principal lamented to me that she was surprised by test
results showing students across the grades were not doing well distinguishing
between key ideas and details. “Can you help us?” she asked.
Well,
I am no magician but I seem to recall that when I was teaching elementary
school, kids found summarizing difficult. Ask them to give an oral summary and
you got everything they could
remember reading. It was as if the
Declaration of Independence in Reading said that “all facts are created equal.”
There was no key idea and there were no details. I think that this is the crux
of the problem.
But
. . . there are solutions—or at least sensible steps to take to address the
problem. Here are a few:
1.
Discuss what summary
means. It means being brief, concise, and direct. It does not mean telling
everything you know. I like to discuss the relationship between “the big idea”
and the “terrific specific.” That’s because writing a good summary means
finding an important idea to focus on and then giving only the most convincing
details to support it. I learned this firsthand when I wrote annotations for
the annual Notable Social Studies Trade Books list. We only had about 150 words
to write about why we were recommending a book. It was a tough lesson and it
forged a lasting relationship between me and the delete key on my computer. I
learned to pare down my writing.
2.
Limit the number of words allowed for written
summaries. And, while you are at it, limit the time allotted for oral summaries
too. In this way, students will have to separate the main idea from the
details.
3.
Share writing that has clearly stated
generalizations that are illustrated by intriguing details. Not only is this
writing more understandable, it is also more interesting. If you are looking for examples, my all
time favorite writer when it comes to clarity, coherence, and descriptive
detail is Russell Freedman. Check out any of his books and you will see what it
means to write clear, coherent, descriptive nonfiction prose with overarching
generalizations. Of course, if you want to be up to date, check out Freedman’s latest
book, We Will Not Be Silent, which a
Kirkus reviewer wrote “stands out for its focus and concision.” If you can’t wait
for this new book, try Immigrant Kids,
Kids at Work, or Children of the
Great Depression. There is a lot more to choose from. Whichever book you
choose, be explicit when showing kids the key idea and the supporting details
in these books. Then as you read to them, ask the kids to take over this job
themselves and tell you the key ideas and supporting details.
4.
Write summaries or explanations giving key ideas
and details. Have students practice by working with partners and then report
back to the class on their results. We know very well that reading and writing
are connected, so we can expect that if students can find key ideas and details
in their reading, they will also begin to use them in their writing.
The
long and the short of this is that by providing good examples of writing and
time read it, discuss it, and write like it, students will learn about the
relationship between key ideas and details.